Audience Feedback

After uploading and sharing our first draft of the opening scene we found that the audience feedback was both positive and negative.

Positive

• The audience liked our credits at the end as they hadn't seen it been done before and also they thought it was quite interesting to watch. 
• The audience also liked the different shots we used to show different parts of the opening scene. 
• They enjoyed the music and thought it fitted well with our genre and they thought it made the scene more intense. 
• They also enjoyed the way we had showed our title of the film and the way the font looked. 
• They also liked the plot of the opening scene and they liked the setting. 

Negative

• The audience thought the opening scene was too long and needed to be cut down as they lost interest half way. 
• They also thought that some of the cuts needed to be removed or changed to make the scene more interesting. 
• The plot of the story needed to be shown a bit clearer as well as some of the audience felt it was a bit unclear and weren't sure of what the opening scene was about. 

With the feedback we collected from the public, we decided to add and delete a few things in our opening scene. We deleted a few shots which were used to show different events, but also we shortened the scene down to make it short and snappy. We then added a few new shots in our opening scene of the murderer so the audience can grow a relationship with the murderer. We also added a voice over as we thought it would be effective and also the audience might find it more interesting to watch. Also we felt it would make the plot and the story clearer, which means the audience would understand our opening scene.