When getting feedback on our first draft of our opening scene we looked at the good and bad feedback so we knew what to change and what to keep the same when creating the final draft. We looked at the positive feedback and took on board what the public liked, and we kept that in the opening scene. We then looked at the negative feedback and took on board what the public didn't like, and we changed it in the opening scene. We also looked at other peoples opening scenes and took on board what they did to make their opening scene effective.
We decided to add a few things into our opening scene that we took from other peoples opening scenes as we thought it would make our opening scene more effective and make the film fit into the horror genre.
In our new opening scene we added basic credits so the viewer could easily see the actresses in our opening scene. We also deleted a few clips that were unnecessary and we added a few new clips that show more of our murderer. We did this to show the audience more about our murderer in the opening scene and also so the audience grows a sort of relationship with the murderer. We added more transitions so the part when we changed to the murderer being shown would flow better. We also added a voice over to our opening scene because we had seen other people use that technique and we thought it was very effective. So we decided to use a voice over in our opening scene as well. When we added the voice over we felt it made the opening scene more effective and made the scene more tense. The voice over adds to our horror genre option as other films use voice overs to start off their films.
Our new improved opening scene is more intense and it fits into the genre more than the first draft. I'm glad that we added these new techniques and shots as I feel it makes our film more interesting and tense.
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